August 1 - "heart" - provided by Kat Creighton
a sparrow's heartbeats-
holding the new-born
close
holding the new-born
close
August 2 - "full moon" - provided by Judith Gorgone
One of my all-time favourite prompts, yet strangely, i couldn't come up with much. Wrote and discarded at least ten of them and finally settled on this one.
full moon-
turning the key
in the latch
or
turning the key
in the latch
or
turning
the key in the latch-
full moon
(revision suggested by Freddy Ben Arroyo)
the key in the latch-
full moon
(revision suggested by Freddy Ben Arroyo)
August 3 - "sand" - provided by Vincent Houreau
beach holiday-
resigned to the sand
in my soup
and
sand dunes
as far as the eyes go
you, you and only you
in the wake of the waterfowls the lightness of ripples
and
unknown seabird-
the anchor rope tilts
ever so slightly
2 comments:
I love #1. And #3 made me laugh. Really good. So glad to read your haiku this month on NaHaiWriMo.
Hey Jessica, glad to have you visit and thanks for your comments!I am a big fan of your ku!
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