Did you think of going more abstract? Likehonking from within the clouds or such? I thought as I read it (and I like it as it stands) that geese honk as well, and I always look for them when I hear their sound.
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Did you think of going more abstract? Like
honking from within the clouds or such? I thought as I read it (and I like it as it stands) that geese honk as well, and I always look for them when I hear their sound.
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