tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7217745671314160119.post4898323240712473373..comments2023-03-19T00:24:41.717-07:00Comments on wild berries: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7217745671314160119.post-79143208828804368022013-08-11T05:33:24.603-07:002013-08-11T05:33:24.603-07:00Did you think of going more abstract? Like
honkin...Did you think of going more abstract? Like<br />honking from within the clouds or such? I thought as I read it (and I like it as it stands) that geese honk as well, and I always look for them when I hear their sound.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com