Saturday, November 30, 2013

November shiki kukai

 Another second place in The November Shiki kukai free format section. The winning entry in that section was this awesome ku by Vinay Ravindranath of our very own In haiku group:

ink puddle--
the words that
never were

And my runner-up ku :

this puddle
what my paper boat knows
of the sea 

Paresh Tiwari was in third place with this entry:

alley puddle--
 a paper boat  glides
over the stars

Incidentally, poets from India made a clean sweep of the top places in this free format section.

In the kigo section, I was in the fifth place with this ku :

morning chill-
the chimney smoke curls back
into itself

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